Greetings, all!
Since Camp Nano is almost over...HOW IS IT ALREADY ALMOST THE END OF JULY???...ahem, I decided to share a little of what I've been working on this month.
Introducing,
Synopsis
Eden Claire is an orphaned serving
girl in England. Living her lonely life working in the library of a boarding
school, she begins to think that she must always settle for less, and that her
dreams of comradeship, adventure, and sailing to unknown lands must slowly
dwindle away to nothing.
However, when an old forgotten
acquaintance shows up on her doorstep with a note left to Eden by her father, those
dreams might just become rekindled; dreams that will take Eden to wild
escapades on the high seas.
Eden must outwit the notorious
Damian the Black Hearted and his gang of pirates in her quest for her father’s
treasure, but she cannot do it alone-she will need the help of others. Can she
learn how important true friendship is, even at the cost of losing the
treasure…and possibly her own life?
Characters
^ Eden Claire Gray, my 16 year old protagonist. She's loyal, very smart, has a phonographic memory, and is disabled in her right hand.
^ Elani, my mentor. She's an amazing fighter and is incredibly skilled with weapons and athletics.
^ Freja, my ally. She's a mischievous gypsy girl that is fierce and street-smart.
^ Damian the Black Hearted, my villain. 'Nuff said.
7-7-7 Tag
Jane Maree, our Most Honorable Cabin Leader, tagged all of us in her cabin with this lovely 7-7-7 tag, which involves going to the seventh page, count down seven lines, and share the next seven paragraphs. So, here goes!
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My heart dropped into my stomach and
I let go of the little girl’s hand I was holding. I stepped in front of Mrs.
Greenbury and wiped some of the soot off my face. “Who are you?” I demanded.
He smiled, his cheekbones jutting
out sharply out of his face and casting dark shadows around his mouth. “Damian
is my name.” When I showed no recognition, he cocked his head a little. “I’m
surprised your father never spoke of me.”
I spat. “I’m glad he didn’t.” This
was now two people who had claimed to know my father today. It was becoming a
pattern I hoped wouldn’t continue.
He nodded. “You have your father’s
spirit.” He took a few steps forwards. “I think you have something that I
need.”
I shook my head. “I don’t know what
you’re talking about.” Out of the corner of my eye I saw Mrs. Greenbury shooing
the other children away. I turned my attention back on the pirate. “I own very
little, and I don’t think any of my belongings could help you in any way.”
“No letters, or papers of any
kind?” He took another step forward. I held my ground.
“No.”
*
I hope you enjoyed that!!!
I also wanted to share with you a sea shanty that I wrote for the first chapter.
One dark night, the thunder rolled;
The waves crashed on the sailors bold;
That heaved the oars and on ropes pulled;
To make it through the waters cold,
Before their souls to Death were sold.
So listen my child, and from fear be set free
Of the salty depths of the mighty sea.
They rowed for hours, admidst the spray
Of salty sea, and the thunderous fray
Of breaking waves upon their ship.
But
God above had heard their cry,
And though their strength had all been spent,
He brought them safe to sandy shore.
So listen my child, and from fear be set free
Of the salty depths of the mighty sea.
I had a lot of fun writing that. :-)
And no WIP post for me would be complete without sharing an few aesthetics that I made for my story!
And finally, here is the playlist that I made for my story!
That's all from me! Tell me, how are you WIPs going? Are you doing Camp Nano? Can you believe that it's almost the end of July??? And what do you think about my story?
Namarie!
This is awesome, MEM! :) I can't wait to read your story.
ReplyDelete-Quinley
P.S. I love your music playlist.
Thank you, Quinley! :-D <3
DeleteI love sailing/pirate stories, though I haven't read many, tbh. I'm actually co-writing a story with pirate hunters at the moment... OSSaS sounds really cool, though!! Your characters, I think, are gonna be epic!!
ReplyDeleteHaha, same. XD I'm writing a pirate novel and I don't even know what I'm doing. That's awesome! Thanks! I hope so...:-D
DeleteThat snippet is so cool! *squeals* And that sea shanty is amaaazing. <3 <3 I love this so much!
ReplyDeleteYAY!!! I'm so glad!!! <3
DeleteI love everything about this WIP - the characters, the story, and especially the aesthetics and the sea shanty!
ReplyDeleteCatherine
THANK YOU, Catherine!!! <3
DeleteYour story sounds really cool. I'm always up for a tale of pirates and have one of my own knocking around my mind. I'm glad camp is going well for you! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rachel! That's cool! I hope to hear more about it. ;-D
DeleteIt is! :-D
This. Sounds. AMAZING. I love pirate stories, so... YES AND PLEASE AND THANK YOU.
ReplyDeleteI love your snippet and sea shanty and aesthetics SO, SO MUCH!! :D
XD Thank you Lila!!! XD I'm so glad you love it! I've been wanting to write a sea story for a long time now. :-)
DeleteYour story sounds amazing, I hope to be able to read more some day!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!! I'm pretty sure that can be arranged...;-D
DeleteThis story sounds SO majorly cool! I actually pinned some of your stuff to my story board––the aesthetics were that good! (I hope you don't mind. 😊)
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU, ZELLA!!! (That's totally fine! I'm glad you liked them so much!)
DeleteTHIS SOUNDS SO EPIC, I NEED TO READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAlso, may I just say that Damian looks freaking awesome?? Anyways, I love the sound of this, best of luck writing it, you can do it!
THANK YOU!!! :-D <3 As soon as I finish writing it I will open it up for Beta readers, so if you want you can read it then! :-D
DeleteHaha, I've had a lot of people say that. I think he's pretty cool too. XD Thank you so much!!! <333
Ooh, your WIP sounds awesome! Pirate stories are always fun to read XD Your characters sound really cool, and I really liked that snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Andrea!!! I think so too. XD <3
DeleteAHHHH THAT SNIPPET THO!! <3 Please give me more!!
ReplyDeleteDamian the Blackhearted looks very ... blackhearted, to say the least. XD
This sounds so amazing so let me read it now!!
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I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!! <3
DeleteYes, I think so too. XD He's going to be a very interesting and cool villain.
XD It's not ready yet!!! Soon, I promise!!! XD
THIS. IS. SO. EPIC!!!
ReplyDelete(Is it bad that I'm already shipping Eden and Damian?)
THANK YOU!!! <3
Delete(Um, maybe? XD XD XD)
OMW your MC sounds exactly like ME! *faints*
ReplyDeleteHeehee, that's funny! I didn't realize that I was writing her like you. XD
DeleteI'd consider myself loyal and smart, as well as having a phonographic memory and being technically disabled in my right hand. When I read the description of your protagonist it seriously felt like reading a description of myself... which would be slightly creepy if someone I didn't know had a character like that. XD
DeleteAnd this story sounds epic. Going on my tbr asap list. *hint hint*
ReplyDeleteYAY!!! I can't wait for you to read it!!!
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