Greetings, all!
I do believe Spring is finally here. This week our high was 83 degrees Farenheight; and its only mid-April!!
Not that I’m complaining, of course. XP
Camp Nano has been going pretty good for me of late; I’m really developing my story and characters. Freja my gypsy girl has been as irritating to Eden (my MC) as always. And FINALLY we’re having some action…as there may or may not have been a pirate attack at sea…and there may or may not have been some causalities… *whistles nonchalantly*
Snippets!
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Freja took to sea life like a fish
to water. I know that is a horrible cliché, but that is the first thing I
thought of when I saw her skipping around the deck of the ship, singing in her
hoarse voice and swabbing the decks with a mop that looked as if it had also
done duty as a club in its day…which had probably been a hundred years ago. The
thick handle was breaking apart, the tendrils of cloth attached to the bottom
were fraying, and it hardly held enough water to fill a small cup.
*
Freja bounced up and down. “I heard
one o’ the sailors talking at dinner. He said there are mermaids in the waters
down south. Have you ever seen a mermaid, Elani?”
Her faint smile grew larger. “No, Freja; I don’t believe they exist.”
Freja slumped. “Barnacles, I had hoped they were real. They sounded so pretty.”
Elani opened her eyes. “What did you just say?”
“They sounded so pretty?”
“No; did you say barnacles?”
Freja shrugged. “Y’ smacked me the last time I said something that I had learned while living with the gypsies, so I said something I learned from a sailor.”
Elani shook her head. “Barnacles is better than the other thing you said.”
*
Freja laughed. “Y’ can make a wish!
If you wish on a shooting star, it will come true next time you see a shooting
star.”
Elani snorted. “That’s almost as preposterous as believing in mermaids.”
*
Then I heard the screaming.
*
How much worse could you get?
…Much worse, as it turned out.
*
His dark eyes were shaded by his
dark hair; and his thin mouth was partially hidden by the shadows from his
prominent cheekbones.
*
So that’s how my story’s coming along. XD
Aanndd…a friend of mine who wants to become an illustrator is trying her hand at drawing for books for my story. Here is the first illustration that she has completed; and she is currently working on a couple more.
Isn’t it lovely??? :-O <33 Thanks so much E.M.!
How is Camp Nano
going for the participants out there? Did you enjoy my snippets? Has Spring
reached all you people in the Western Hemisphere yet? XD
Have a lovely Easter\Resurrection Sunday everyone!!!
Have a lovely Easter\Resurrection Sunday everyone!!!
Namarie!
Ohhhhhh the SNIPPETS!!!! "Then I heard the screaming." Okay, that's a HORRIBLE cliffhanger right there, how DARE you not include more...
ReplyDeleteI have been told that I am the queen of horrible cliffhangers. XD You're welcome. XP
DeleteGreat snippets!!!
ReplyDeleteAlso WOW, THAT ART.
XD Thanks!!! <33
DeleteI KNOW. IT'S BEAUTIFUL. :-O
What lovely photos
ReplyDeleteThank you, Zella!
DeleteI love the reoccurence of the mermaid mentions! Continuity right there!
ReplyDeleteCamp's not going so great with me, but hopefully I'll at least get a little more done this week so I don't completely boink.
Beautiful pictures! While I'm not overly thrilled about it being spring (I felt robbed of a proper winter), the flowers are stunning this year!
XD Thank you!!! I've been enjoying have mermaid references in my story. XD
DeleteAw, I'm sorry! At least a little is better than nothing; right???
Thank you!!! Yes; they certainly are!!! (Hehe; I didn't feel that way. We got a lot of snow here. XD Although I know a lot of people didn't get snow. :-Z)
Ahhhh, your pictures!! They're so wonderful :) And your friend's picture is especially good.
ReplyDeleteYou know what else is good? YOUR SNIPPETS :) I already love Elani and Freya :)
Thank you!!! And YES. It is amazing! I can't wait to get the other illustrations from her. :-D
DeleteAw, THANK YOU!!! I love them too. XD
Aww, lovely photos! <3
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ann!!!
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